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Lilo & Stitch/Return to Never Land (femslash, Jane/Lilo)
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Lilo and Jane try to learn the constellations of Neverland.

"Do you stargaze much?" Jane asked.

Lilo pursed her lips. Both girls were lying in a quiet field, learning the constellations of Neverland. "Well, I gaze at stars a lot. But that's usually just because that's what you see when you're flying a spaceship. As far as lying down just looking at the stars, probably not so much."

"Hm."

Lilo paused, and said, "That's weird, isn't it?"

"Hm?" Jane looked over at her, and Lilo pushed herself up on one arm.

"Just that I spend all this time flying around in outer space, and I don't even stop and appreciate the stars. What's wrong with me?"

"Nothing's wrong with you," Jane said soothingly, and bit back a smile when Lilo quirked her eyebrow. "I think people watch the stars because they seem so...distant. Magnificent, but distant. They're so far out of reach." She turned her eyes skyward again. "You can see the stars as closely as you like. It must be a different experience."

Lilo flopped back down on the ground. "That's deep, man."

After several more minutes of silence, Jane sighed. "I was trying to figure out if the constellations are different, but I haven't spent enough time studying the stars on Earth to really know."

"I don't think they're the same," Lilo said. "Not that I'm an expert, but they just look kinda, I don't know, alien."

"Foreign," Jane said. "Beautiful though."

"Yeah." There was another period of silence, and Lilo said, "My friend Myrtle has got a ton of freckles. She's really pale; she's lived in Hawaii her whole life and she still has to use sunscreen all the time. But I've always thought that freckles were cool, because they're like constellations on your body."

"Hm," Jane said, and then, keeping her voice perfectly light, she asked, "Do you often study other girls' bodies?"

There was a beat, then Lilo said, "No! What? No! It is sooo not like that, I mean -- what kind of girl do you think I am? That would just be...terrible. It's not, it's not like it's my fault they're all in their swimsuits all the time. I just live there, you know? I would never--" Jane finally lost the battle to withhold her laughter, and let out an undignified guffaw before clapping her hands over her mouth. Lilo immediately stopped talking and pushed herself up on her arms. "You...you're messing with me! That is so..."

"Whatever gives you that idea?" Jane asked, trying and failing to sound casual. She giggled again.

"You are just the worst, you know that?" Lilo leaned over Jane, planting her hands on the ground above Jane's shoulders. Her long hair fell on either side of her face, effectively blocking Jane's view.

"I don't know what you're talking about," Jane said, her eyes sparkling as they met Lilo's, "and I can't see the stars with you doing that."

"Whatever. You don't even recognize the constellations."

"Maybe I'm trying to learn them."

Lilo rolled her eyes. "I think that's enough stargazing for now, don't you?"

"Oh? What else would you have us do?"

Lilo smirked and leaned down, and soon enough she was making Jane see stars all over again.
Happy Birthday, Mag! Whenever you see this. I promise not to tease you about being old for the month and a half it'll take me to catch up.

So I figured I'd do a surprise present for ~fortheloveofpizza's birthday. I started a much longer piece, then suddenly had a, "Wait, what on Earth am I writing?" moment (they happen sometimes) and there wasn't enough time to course correct and still get something up, so I whipped up this little ficlet instead. The longer story will be forthcoming.
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Janeandothers4741 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Student Artist
*Sees the word Jane* *Closes tab immedieatly and comes back to this page to comment it.* (Great though. I read after that.)
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blubirdie Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011
They are just absolutely adorable together! This is genius! I love this pairing. Keep these stories coming!!
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generalzoi Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2011
Haha, thanks! I do so love this pairing.
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Up-In-Arms-100 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2011
YES!!! There needs to be more for this pairing!! I think it's only you and fortheloveofpizza who do anything for them what a shame. :(
But I can't wait for the full story! :D
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keida-shiro Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2011
OMFG YESH!!!!!!!!!!!! >/////< <33333333
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generalzoi Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2011
Yessss!! They are awesome!
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keida-shiro Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011
sooooo cuteee!!!! >////<
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H34th3r Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
awww its so sweet i actually like this ring to! i hope you come up with more stories and fortheloveofpizza dos more art
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generalzoi Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
Heh, well, I have at least one other half written, so that'll probably go up eventually.
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H34th3r Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2011
great :) i've been reading some of your other stuff too. its reaaly good, i hope you keep up your writing.
lol sad to say i've had a pretty bad week and your stories cheered me up quite abit. so thanx for beeing an amazing writer.
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generalzoi Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2011
Aw, well I'm glad I could help cheer you up a bit! These stories, for me, are about having fun, and it's always great when I can share that with something. :aww:
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MacElf Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing as always.
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generalzoi Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
Thanks! They're sweet together.
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fortheloveofpizza Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
Ah! This is certainly a wonderful surprise to find! This is such a cute little piece, it's like a little sweet treat to cap off the end of my day. These two are just so cute together, and, I could be reading too much into it but you even totally referenced my comment about Myrtle and Lilo being into redheads. Though, seriously, who wouldn't be? XD But, myes, I greatly enjoyed this and I am greatly looking forward to the longer story. Meaning: I'm freaking out a little! 8D

What a great way to end a wonderful day. Thank you so much! :hug:
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generalzoi Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
Then yay, it has served its function as a nice birthday surprise! I didn't leave myself enough time to complete the longer piece, but it's a-comin'! I had to sneakily write this at my desk while by boss was sitting in the next cubicle over. :D
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ChrisTheKitty Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011
Cool Story,Looks awesome. =)
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generalzoi Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
Thanks.
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ChrisTheKitty Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
Your welcome. =)
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Yuri1990 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011
Awwwww. Man, this is a pairing that I like that I would never have thought of before. :3
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generalzoi Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
Fandom makes finding new pairings fun!
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Yuri1990 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011
Indeed! :3
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